Hi Will,
Here`s a PO as a ref suggestion for the pose. Currently I think the head is a bit too forward in relation to the character`s torso. the character right leg is a bit detached from the pelvis and the left lower leg feels a bit distorted.
That being said, I can`t quite tell what the character holding the sword is doing. Is he getting ready to block the incoming arrows? Is he making a strike?
Hope these feedback helps. Let me know if u have other questions.
Cheers!
Jianli
Hi Jianli, thank you for your paintover, this is great! Just what I was hoping for. Will adjust my illustration as you've suggested. As for the character's sword, it was supposed to be an angry brandishing moment, like a warrior from an Akira Kurosawa samurai film, when he's just angrily waving the sword and yelling in desperation/defiance? Maybe I could adjust the arms so he's in mid-swing, trying blocking an arrow and see what that looks like!
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